Eye in the Sky Feat. bronze budda

[_Lyrics]

[SOUNDCLICK]6713214[/SOUNDCLICK]

1st- bobericc
2nd-bronze budda
production/beat-CH3

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...er-372725.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-372347.html

[Reason.]

presses play...

i think you cut too much bass form the vocals...they sound too thin...maybe a slight boost around 250 Hz for some body and dpth could help out, sweep the frequency range to find the right freq.

your wordply\ay and rhyme schemes are tight...beat is alright thorugh the verse, the hook is nice. i'm digging that sample. overall i'd say this isn't a BAD piece, but i wouldn't pay money for it, namean. things to work on would be making the whole verse mesh into a single entity, it sounds like you just make words rhyme well, there's no real point to your verse...at least to me...sounds tight thoung, vocab is there and you're definitely better then alot of people i've heard in my life. keep at it. sounds good

[_Lyrics]

the point is... im god


thanks for the feed muhdude

[Keeby Swaggz]

that's a crazy pic... anyway... beat is kinda cool, eerie and chill... your flow is real smooth, delivery ain't bad either... vocals are a little thin... lyrics are kinda dope, a little abstract but descriptive... I like the second dude's presence, his delivery is dope... voice reminds me of Biz Markie a bit... his flow is a little forced in spots... but overall this is pretty hot... I like the sample in the hook... cool shit...

[Possible]

nasty beat.. no bullshit...

what did you do with your vocals? compression ? what ratio? or what other dynamic changes did you make to it? like dude up there said, sounds thin could be anyting from a simple EQ to a dynamic change of your vocals but I think that needs to be worked on...but you two on this track kinda gives it an old school grave diggas feel...Im definatly takin it back to that...specially since that bronze cat kinda sound like gatekeeper...but good track..only criticsm I have is your mixing my dude...keep droppin and studyin mixing tips....peace

[_Lyrics]

i definitely do need help working with mixing... i didn't fuck with the vocals at all.. only the ones through the intro and chorus that i created effects for... so thanks for the advice fam..

[keywerd]

wow ill beat. flow was there, just work a little bit on breath control. not a bad tracc at all but you could DEFINETLY fix your vocals because it sounds like you're whispering, you should have come on stronger somewhat of making a statement, feel me? but everything else is good multis were there like they always are, and lyrics were strong. not bad, keep it up.

[Ntalek]

dope song..I really liked the lyrics and I caught the concept which was dope...the beat was nice and chill the sample really made me like damn this is nice yo!! overall I thought your delivery was more on point than some of the other stuff I've heard from you...and the other guy did sound forced in spots but he picked it back up..overall good song...work on yo mixing..bro..

[Op3ration]

beats alright like your lyrics though mixed not bad could be a bit better though chorus sounded fucked up but i think its meant to sound that way 2nd guy reminds me on infinit skillz a little could have put more emotion in it but not bad man keep it up nice drop get back at me